A word meaning "more related"
Nana travels to America to have a surgery done. One that could put an end
to her life-long affliction. But is her problem exclusive of her body? Or
is rather a condition more related to her soul?
What word could I use to replace "more related" in the passage above? I
think the phrase more related won't have much impact in the reader.
(By the way, is but necessary in the second last sentence)?
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